My tutor recommended also this Utube video.
It is a series of images used to tell the story of the departure of a Father and how his family see him off to the train with his suitcase. The images are so simple a picture frame with a family photo being wrapped and put in the suitcase the touch of a hand on a shoulder. The children as they rise from their slumber. They are such simple images that it makes them powerful and the story is easily understood. Perhaps when putting together it is easy to get caught up in trying to do too much with an image that sometimes simple is the best way. I feel that while looking for a story to tell we often go looking far a field when the best stories are right under our nose. I will take this into consideration in the future when I am looking for inspiration.
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